Hi, I've left a review on Amazon for you. Well done! I do recommend, though, that you do a little more editing as there are several typos. One of the key things I noticed was the repetition of words within a few lines - this will often happen and you, the author, won't notice or be able to see it. I'm not an expert - as you have seen, but I found autocrit to be invaluable as a way of identifying what you won't see.
You are looking for some background on your grand-father Robert Hugh Pizey? I think my mother was briefly married to him just after the war. They were divorced in 1948. If I'm right you might like to get in touch.
Hi Guzzman, I've been scrolling all over the internet recently trying to get hands on a copy of HMS Brilliant. Just seen your posts about having a copy of the DVDs and was wondering if I could purchase a copy from you? Chances are this forum isn't used anymore but incase it is, could anyone help me out?