Do you want picky, or grammar police? Some of it is a bit subjective but here's how I would have done it.
In May 2007 Cpl Marcus Selvey was injured in an explosion whilst serving in Afghanistan suffering a total of 8 fractures in his right leg and foot. Help for Heroes' task is to raise money toward building a swimming pool and gym complex at Headley Court; the tri-service rehabilitation centre at Leatherhead. Our servicemen deserve the very best facilities to help them recover from their terrible wounds, by supporting HELP FOR HEROES you can do something to show that you appreciate them. Marcus is taking part in a sponsored bicycle ride through France to raise money for this worthy cause: PLEASE HELP.
How much do you want to bet that I made a spelling error somewhere? :dwarf:
"One woman, believed to be in her 30s, was so incensed that the soldiers - many of them amputees having returned from conflicts in the Middle East and Asia - were using the pool that she told them that they did not deserve to be there.
It is alleged that she told the men that she pays to swim there and they do not. According to witnesses she was so abusive that the soldiers' instructor pulled the groups out of the water to avoid further embarrassment."
FCUKING BITCH - it's a shame the instructors didn't pull that fcuking low life piece of sh!t out of the pool and rip her a new ARSÂ£HOLE.
I know that area well and there are some pretty serious hills along the route. Once you get up on to the plateau at the back it is a bit easier with largely traffic free roads.
French drivers too are much more tolerant of cyclists than in the UK. Plus the Normans by and large are fond of the Brits.
Cpl should be spelt out in full I reckon, and the spaces and punctuation as suggested; otherwise it is fine.
Going via/near Dieppe at least he'll be able to see the site of another right royal cock-up, and a victory at Arques la Battaille just outside the town (Henry V) on his way to Agincourt.
Good luck to him.
We've now been sat around at work discussing the appropriate use of plural possessive apostrophe's, semi-colon, colon, capitalisation and abbreviations for over an hour........I'm bored, I want to go home :dwarf:
I've just been looking at your map Shaggy, there seems to be an awful lot of underwater cycling! Are you setting realistic goals here? :rendeer: