Rate my rap song

#1
Just been chilling with my boy freestyling in my room a bit and came up with this that i'm gonna put into a proper song:

I kick down the door way-ving the Mac-10
squeeze tha fukin trigga now there's a lotta dead men
Nailor's in the place ... it's getting violent and nasty
i'll fuk u all up then eat me cornish pasty
if u text my fukin bitch then this is what u get
i'll cause fukin chaos while i'm trippin on ket
brap brap brap ... i run the fukin town
don't think i'm a fool or a muthafuckin clown
one o these days i'll be in the corps
making me even harder ... harder than B4
 
#5
Nails said:
Just been chilling with my boy freestyling in my room a bit and came up with this that i'm gonna put into a proper song:

I kick down the door way-ving the Mac-10
squeeze tha fukin trigga now there's a lotta dead men
Nailor's in the place ... it's getting violent and nasty
i'll fuk u all up then eat me cornish pasty
if u text my fukin bitch then this is what u get
i'll cause fukin chaos while i'm trippin on ket
brap brap brap ... i run the fukin town
don't think i'm a fool or a muthafuckin clown
one o these days i'll be in the corps
making me even harder ... harder than B4
Slow day at college then Nails???
 

werqpr

Lantern Swinger
#7
"i'll cause fukin chaos while i'm trippin on ket"

You wanna lay off the special K mate!!!!! slim shady you aint!!!

A* for effot :lol:
 
#9
Nails said:
Just been chilling with my boyfriend freestyling in my sex pad a bit and came up with this that i'm gonna put into a proper song:

I kick down the door way-ving the keyboard
squeeze tha keys now there's a lotta nasty threads
Nailor's in the place ... it's getting violent and nasty
i'll fuk u all up then eat me cornish pasty
if u text my fukin bitch then this is what u get
i'll cause fukin chaos while i'm trippin on frosties
brap brap brap ... i run the fukin forums
don't think i'm a fool or a muthafuckin clown
one o these days i'll be in the corps
bumming me even harder ... harder than B4
seems about right.
 
#12
Forget the UK forces. Go join the USMC, they like to recite crap whilst they are quick marching.

I do give you 10/10 for thinking things up though, you must spend all day at it.
 

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