Navy Diving Critique needed

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  1. Ricky_Rider

    Ricky_Rider New member

    Hi lads,

    Just recently made a facts page about military / navy diving here:

    http://www.squidoo.com/militarydiving

    Please let me know what you think :)

    There must be a few grizzled clearance divers out there ;)

    Thanks for your time
     
  2. soleil

    soleil War Hero

    I think that Naval Gazer will be your man on this - he's v expert in this area.
     
  3. SEP86

    SEP86 War Hero

    Nice page. I can't comment on the detail but I like it.
     
  4. TimeToJoinUp

    TimeToJoinUp New member

    You could do with giving it a quick reread through. There's a few cases of duplicate words, hanging sentences, and incorrect grammar. As above, I can't comment on content, but the layout is quite pleasing.
     
  5. Montigny-La-Palisse

    Montigny-La-Palisse War Hero Moderator

    "Military divers are by their very nature a very different breed to their land-based brethren, they tend to be rough, tough and hard as nails! It is no surprise that the training regimes in place for producing such combat divers is any different!"


    Seriously? Get to fcuk. Divers are fanny's.
     
  6. 2_deck_dash

    2_deck_dash War Hero

    I think the site is pile of hoop and so does my cat:

    [​IMG]
     
  7. JonnoJonno

    JonnoJonno Banned

    -No references
    -Re-worded wikipedia
    -Stating as fact very dubious and impossible to clarify conjecture about the use and sale of weapon systems.
     
  8. daffy1

    daffy1 War Hero

    ''SBS only take on volunteers who are already Royal Marine Commandos.''

    SBS dont just recruit from marines as the site stated, its tri service meaning all three services can have ago at it.
     
  9. Guns

    Guns War Hero Moderator

    not one mention of mirrors or make up, poor
     
  10. Spidiver

    Spidiver War Hero

    Easy tiger..we have feelings...apart from that the site is a very good attempt by a 12 year, factually is complete shite.
     
  11. tommo

    tommo War Hero

    There's no clunge
     
  12. Montigny-La-Palisse

    Montigny-La-Palisse War Hero Moderator

    I like divers really, my Dad was one. He is a throbber though and so are all his diving mates. :lol:
     
  13. witsend

    witsend War Hero Book Reviewer

    Divers, the illegitimate lovechilds of Gok Wan & Susan Boyle.
     
  14. Ricky_Rider

    Ricky_Rider New member

    Pretty much the mixed feedback I expected.
    Thanks for your comments, especially from the grammer nazi cat and spi helm.

    This was written partially from wikipedia as a reference, but also from the hip and heart, as it shows. But the pages hearts in the right place :)

    Naval Gazza!
    Naval Gazza!
    Where are you?
    :)

    I'll take another look at the 'hoop' and see what I can rustle up :D
     
  15. Ricky_Rider

    Ricky_Rider New member

    Tommo, wtf is clunge?

    You got me on that one!
     
  16. Ricky_Rider

    Ricky_Rider New member

    Thanks for that daffy.

    Previously (going off a published story from an old boy sbs) I'd been told it was only marines they took from.
     
  17. Ricky_Rider

    Ricky_Rider New member

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