Navy Diving Critique needed

#4
Ricky_Rider said:
Hi lads,

Just recently made a facts page about military / navy diving here:

http://www.squidoo.com/militarydiving

Please let me know what you think :)

There must be a few grizzled clearance divers out there ;)

Thanks for your time
You could do with giving it a quick reread through. There's a few cases of duplicate words, hanging sentences, and incorrect grammar. As above, I can't comment on content, but the layout is quite pleasing.
 
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"Military divers are by their very nature a very different breed to their land-based brethren, they tend to be rough, tough and hard as nails! It is no surprise that the training regimes in place for producing such combat divers is any different!"


Seriously? Get to fcuk. Divers are fanny's.
 
#7
-No references
-Re-worded wikipedia
-Stating as fact very dubious and impossible to clarify conjecture about the use and sale of weapon systems.
 
#8
''SBS only take on volunteers who are already Royal Marine Commandos.''

SBS dont just recruit from marines as the site stated, its tri service meaning all three services can have ago at it.
 
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Montigny-La-Palisse said:
"Military divers are by their very nature a very different breed to their land-based brethren, they tend to be rough, tough and hard as nails! It is no surprise that the training regimes in place for producing such combat divers is any different!"


Seriously? Get to fcuk. Divers are fanny's.
Easy tiger..we have feelings...apart from that the site is a very good attempt by a 12 year, factually is complete shite.
 
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#12
Spidiver said:
Montigny-La-Palisse said:
"Military divers are by their very nature a very different breed to their land-based brethren, they tend to be rough, tough and hard as nails! It is no surprise that the training regimes in place for producing such combat divers is any different!"


Seriously? Get to fcuk. Divers are fanny's.
Easy tiger..we have feelings...apart from that the site is a very good attempt by a 12 year, factually is complete shite.
I like divers really, my Dad was one. He is a throbber though and so are all his diving mates. :lol:
 
#14
Pretty much the mixed feedback I expected.
Thanks for your comments, especially from the grammer nazi cat and spi helm.

This was written partially from wikipedia as a reference, but also from the hip and heart, as it shows. But the pages hearts in the right place :)

Naval Gazza!
Naval Gazza!
Where are you?
:)

I'll take another look at the 'hoop' and see what I can rustle up :D
 
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daffy1 said:
''SBS only take on volunteers who are already Royal Marine Commandos.''

SBS dont just recruit from marines as the site stated, its tri service meaning all three services can have ago at it.
Thanks for that daffy.

Previously (going off a published story from an old boy sbs) I'd been told it was only marines they took from.
 

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